Posted by: 94stranger | December 2, 2007

Poem: Goatherd

All night long the nightingale

calls through this turning garden in the stars.

Sweet in the flowering thyme he kneels

dim in the fields of evening;

till he and the peaceful goats are ready

to go and lie down.

Today I felt the urge to post something from an earlier period of my life - in this case, my late twenties, during my self-sufficiency-community-back to the land phase. As I mentioned, some 15 years ago I had a moment of annoyance with my poetic production and trashed everything I’d written, on the basis that whatever I could remember might have some merit, whilst the rubbish would sink without trace. This is one of the survivors in memory. I guess some people would consider it too slight to be dignified by the grand epithet poem, but I still like it - perhaps just out of nostalgia for a faraway time.

Responses

As you know I am not a writer, and for that reason I probably should not post my opinions on here…but I have to go against my own advice and say that I love this little poem.

I have been trying to follow your discussion about poetry, and I find it interesting.

If a poem (or writings) touch one heart, changes thinking, inspires, motivates, etc…then isn’t that is greatness?

For example, I know the following is a famous quote…and to me it is a simple one, but it changed my life. I still carry it in my wallet.

“If a man advances confidently in the direction of his dreams, and endeavors to live the life for which he has imagined, he will meet with great success in uncommon hours”
- Thoreau

Your poem “Goatherd” reminds me of some of Thoreau’s writings. The words are your own though, and they made me appreciate the peace of your “back to the land phase” As for me, I continue to dwell in that phase…it is where I am happiest.

I look forward to reading your words..whether recent or from a time past.

until later then…

Namaste’,

~suz

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